Cake Mistake Page 2 (Broku5000 Birthday Gift)

Happy Birthday ! I made these pages a month and a half ago and was kind enough to give me some advice on what to improve for these and future pages so thank you. (I was only able to fix a few small things none of the major ones though) I really hope Broku and everyone else likes these, as I am very proud of them, it was kind of hard just holding on to them waiting, without anyone seeing them. It was a lot of fun drawing Broku's characters but as you can see I don't really have a "style" so it looks like I copied Broku haha oh well. This was originally going to be just one page with Torige (my favourite) but I liked the idea of adding the whole family so that's why the second page feels more "rushed". If by chance some of you DON'T know Broku5000 go check him out! He's currently continuing my favourite comic of his, I know you all love Giantesses. If you didn't see it I posted a separate version of the ending with a special birthday message for Broku in the description. 

Page 1 weskripsy.deviantart.com/art/C…

Birthday message weskripsy.deviantart.com/art/H…

Sketch 3 hours
Line art 3 hours
Colouring/improvements 3 hours 45 minutes